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Post by Arcus on Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:36 pm

OK, let's get to talking about these new characters and then come up with a story.

Characters thus far:

Wrath: The dominant leader of the group, exploding with rage and power, this character is set to use the most powerful form of Xandros' cyber wolf form in a more humanoid cyborg form. Its main weapon will be the form's original vibrating plasma/mana head lancer coverting into a vibrating plasma chainsaw-like great sword.

Greed: A very mysterious person who's set to appear in Xandros' level one wolf form and uses a cane that can turn into a rapid-fire magic bullet spitting machine gun or a sword and a monocle that can identify a person's weaknesses, though this monocle will mostly be used to find out where the person is hiding its money.

Gluttony: A person set to use Xandros' unreleased mecha-phoenix form in a human cyborg format, the phoenix form was also known for its powerful screech that could blow away anything with 300mph wind forces, being a glutton type, the screech will be converted into a weapon that appears more like a cannon made from the form's head and the screech reversed to turn into a super powerful vacuum.

The pet: Set to be a gigantic monstrous beast form of Xandros' grotesque true form with the mentality of a small puppy.

Envy: A person who is nothing but tentacles. Its more human in appearance than most, aside from its entire bottom half being replaced by nothing but sharp and strong tentacles and arms being replaced by tentacles as well. It's also set to have the ability to steal an enemy's soul or powers, depending on how envious it is towards them.

Anything else you guys want to contribute?


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Re: New story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:53 pm

An angel that serves as the pet's caretaker?


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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:04 pm

Can you be more specific?
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Re: New story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:09 pm

Nevermind, probably won't work out
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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:17 pm

yeah.
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Re: New story

Post by Razorshell on Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:54 pm

Can I bring Marcus back?

Maybe Lust could have powers like FMA's lust or envy.
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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:22 pm

No. No FMA stuff.
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Re: New story

Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:06 pm

What about Marcus may I please bring him back?
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:22 pm

I don't know, I haven't come up with a good timeline.
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Re: New story

Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:36 pm

Ah.
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:54 pm

So any ideas?
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Re: New story

Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:06 pm

Hmmmm. Well would one of the Xandroses be pure good?
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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:09 pm

No.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:14 pm

I say the time line should be somewhere around when Xandros starts to reform after the Battle's destroyed him.
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:35 pm

The Battle girls never defeated him, it was their father that took him and ripped him apart, scattering his pieces around Lore and Xandros never reformed. He's the ultimate evil force on Lore.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:38 pm

I mean as in his body reformed. Not he turned good reformed.
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:40 pm

How reformed? He was ripped apart by the Gal'Lin.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:42 pm

Some evil entities are so bad they can grow back from the smallest piece of themselves.
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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:45 pm

Well yeah of course, but Xandros reforming would go against everything the story's supposedly revolving around.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:49 pm

No I think it can work in our favor if people got infected with the Xandros Dna and it completely took over.
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:54 pm

Just give me a character suggestion, we can fuck with the story line later.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:59 pm

What emotions haven't we covered?
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Re: New story

Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:00 pm

All of them except anger, jealousy and happy.
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Post by Razorshell on Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:03 pm

Happy could be this crazy Xendros that get's really happy when it kills stuff.
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Post by Arcus on Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:05 pm

Happiness or joy is already in the form of Xandros' ghost form that uses trickery and illusions as weapons as weapons against its enemies.
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