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Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:24 pm

PROLOGUE: The Sunshine Tragedy

In the distant future past the current events of Lore: The After Years, Lore has created an empire in itself with the colonization of the satellite planet, New Lore and all of Lore's neighboring planets in the Solaris System. Years after the unification of the Solaris system and the establishment of the Lorian empire, a Lorian outpost named the Sunshine Outpost was suddenly attacked and destroyed by an unknown force on the outer reaches of the empire. At first, the people of the empire were forced to think that it was an accident, that something went awry on the outpost and caused it to explode. People then called this event the Sunshine Tragedy. Then, ships were sent in to investigate the debris of the outpost that had been floating around for a few years since the incident, but the crews sent in to clean it up and investigate it were themselves violently attacked and taken over by what is revealed to be a race of super advanced gelatinous machine creatures calling themselves the Kelmen's Edge and they weaponize the clean-up ships, rig them with bombs and send them into various Lorian military outposts to declare war on the Lorian empire. Seeing the tragedies that these hostile aliens caused, the empire has no choice but to go to war and for the next few years, simply defends itself by launching defensive operations to counterattack the Kelmen's Edge while they were really sending scouts out to find the location of the Kelmen's Edge itself. As the war progressed and more information on their exact whereabouts were gathered, the empire decides to launch an offensive operation on the Kelmen's Edge itself.

At the launch of the first offensive operation against the empire's enemies is where we as the players will come in and where the official story starts. Exact names given to the operation and the strike force assembled to perform the operation are needed and are open to suggestions.


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Strike force name: Mobile Force Zero

Operation name: Operation: Snake bite

Mecha name: Guardian-unit

BIO!:

Remember, you're only limited to races profiled in the AE games. Which includes humans, elves, and drakels. Probably orcs too but I don't know.

Pilot Bio:
Name:

Age:

Gender:

Race:

Pilot suit: (Remember, this is the skin tight suit that is a staple fanservice uniform worn by mostly female characters in almost every mecha anime/manga. This can be styled and colored however you guys want. So however crazy you want your Guardian to look, you can go just as crazy with this suit)

Pilot description: (List in brief detail how your character's going to look and don't half-ass this one either. I want EVERY single detail in listed order if you'd even like. Actually, I'd recommend something like that, myself.)

Pilot background: (Put down your pilot's background story and the be absolutely sure to put in the circumstances that led to your pilot joining the military. And don't just put "Later" like somebody we all know here.)

Guardian Bio:

Guardian serial code/name: (Insert either the serial code of your guardian or the code name or both.)

Guardian weapons: (Briefly detail ALL of your Guardian's weapons. Leave no detail out on these babies, they're probably the second most important part aside from the entire thing's look.)

Primary:

Secondary:

Tertiary/Special:

Guardian description:
Max height:
Color(s):
Design:(This is basically how it actually looks all colors and decals aside. It doesn't have to be a human-shape, it can be anything we want)
Movement features: (Basically the jet thrusters and rockets added to or built into your Guardian. Please list every piece of movement mechanisms on your guardian, please!)



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Pilot Bio:
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Guardian Bio:

[b][u][color=violet]Guardian serial code/name:[/color][/u][/b]

[u][b][color=violet]Guardian weapons:[/color][/b][/u]

Primary:

Secondary:

Tertiary/Special:

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Max height:
Color(s):
Design:
Movement features:


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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:30 pm

I think we should rename Kelman's Edge to something more alien-y, like Kel'nari or something
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 4:35 pm

I am open to suggestions on that.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Razorshell on Thu Jul 12, 2012 5:45 pm

Gelari.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:00 pm

Facepalm

I say we do both, the race themselves could be called Kel'nari while the ship can be called Kelman's Edge
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:17 pm

But in most cases, they ARE the ship.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:29 pm

Oh really?
Then how about the collective group call themselves by that?
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:04 pm

But Kelman's Edge sounds like some sort of sword, not a race of gelatinous aliens, or their ship.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:13 pm

A ship can be named anything
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:16 pm

But it should match the style and mannerisms of the race that builds them. You don't see some Protoss ship called Steve's Ship, do you?
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:18 pm

I don't play Star Craft, or any RTS game, so your argument is invalid
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:22 pm

Facepalm I hope you're fucking trolling me.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Proxzki on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:45 pm

He's not. We've already come to the conclusion he isn't that bright. Certainly not bright enough to play an RTS.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Darth Wiggles on Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:58 pm

-_-
Dude, I am smart...
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Razorshell on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:13 pm

Prox that was harsh.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:32 pm

But it was entirely stupid and assy to just disregard an argument because you've never played an RTS.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:48 pm

Let's not hate on each other while discussing a genuine Lore epic here. -,-
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:56 pm

I'm sorry (kinda) But I just cannot abide stupidity like that
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:02 pm

I know. And neither can I. but let's just please think of stuff for the story. I've provided the backstory, you guys give me the real story.
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Post by Zephyr on Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:14 pm

I thought the story was the special force or whatever fighting the aliens in huge mechas
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:21 pm

Yes, that's what it's all aboot.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:48 am

ok, then I guess we have the plot?
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:49 am

Yeah, we most certainly do.
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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Zephyr on Tue Jul 17, 2012 1:57 pm

Pilot Bio:
Name: Marissa Mason

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Pilot suit: light red/ white zero-suit material sports bra, and same colored, same material skin tight knee-length shorts, with dark red metal combat boots. She has a holster for both her plasma pistol, and her combat knife.

Pilot description: long light-brown hair in a pony tail, with strands flowing down one side of her face. She has a certain cold, stoic look to her face, with a few scars here and there, and she has mismatched pupils, one brown and one green. She rarely wears makeup. As for her body, she's a bit on the muscular side, she has moderately sized breasts, but a large, firm buttocks region.

Pilot background: Marissa entered the academy a year after her older sister, Alexis, then dropped out after a few semesters, because the strict policies and guidelines weren't her 'cup of space tea'. She then "commandeered" the prototype X-R50 Centurion guardian from a group of criminals who has previously stolen it from a testing facility. After she sent the criminals running, and showing a bit of 'affection' to some officers, the authorities saw fit to not prosecute her for unlawfully taking command of the Centurion. She then went on to be a freelance bounty hunter and mercenary, taking bounties and contracts to feed herself for a few years, until she heard of the Sunshine Tragedy and the Kelnari, and her sister joining a special strike force. Not wanting Alexis to have all the fun for herself, she sought the Mobile Force Zero and joined their ranks.

Guardian Bio:

Guardian serial code/name: X-R50 Centurion

Guardian weapons: this guardian also wears a huge tower-shield in its left hand, and the primary and secondary weapons in its right.(switches back and forth between primary and secondary). Tertiary is fired from its back.

Primary: A 3-barrel plasma-round firing railgun

Secondary: huge Chainsaw-sword, with laser-blade teeth

Tertiary/Special: Torako-Cannon (fires a huge blast, a super-concentrated beam of special energy that creates something close to a small nuclear blast on contact, takes 10 hours to charge back up once fired)

Guardian description:
Max height: 35 feet tall

Color(s): Dark crimson, black trim.

Design: mecha designed after a roman centurion, with a tower shield, and the head is shaped like the roman helmet. She took it to some mechanics she knew, to fashion her mech into a more female shape, made the chest-cockpit larger for the breasts, and the waist and butt larger as well. The head itself is black, while the helmet ornament thing on top(the plume) is bright red. The pauldrons are red with black trim, as are the chestplate and skirt plates. the legs are a dark grey color and boots are red with black trim. The wings on the back are bright red, and the rockets/boosters are black.

Movement features: Jet thrusters(for atmosphere entry/escape), with stabilizers on them, and anti-grav boosters(for space travel). The jet thrusters are shorter, and go vertically down from the engine pack on back of the guardian. The Anti-grav boosters go diagonally down(at a 45 degree angle) from the engine pack. The guardian also has shoulder 'wings'/flanks going up diagonally from the back the guardian's shoulders, for stability.


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Re: Lore's first mecha story

Post by Arcus on Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:27 pm

My character, Lexie Mason:

Pilot Bio:
Name: Alexis "Lexie" Mason

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Pilot suit: A skintight leotard with long sleeves that fully cover the arms with separate boots that cover most of the legs but expose the thighs and the leotard also exposes the hips and butt as well. The torso is white as well as the back, the shoulders and arms are yellow while the fingers are black. The boots are also yellow with black rubber soles

Pilot description: She is very busty with large ample breasts and round shapely buttocks and is also very curvy with fair white skin, brown eyes and long brown hair reaching down to just about her butt.

Pilot background: Lexie Mason is a 21-year-old soldier of the Lorian empire. Hailing from the home planet of Lore, she graduated top of her class in the top military mecha pilot academy on Lore. From there, she was instantly enrolled in the military where she was then assigned to Mobile Force Zero.

Guardian Bio:

Guardian serial code/name: G-80 BLOOM

Guardian weapons:

Primary: Blast rifle: A standard issue military-grade assault rifle modified to contain a revolver-style ammunition cylinder of three firing batteries containing a flash freeze plasma battery, a hot plasma battery and cold plasma battery. Colored black

Secondary: A large rectangular shield that is white with a blue ring around the edge of the top part of the shield and gray on the bottom part of the shield. The top part opens up to reveal a gun metal gray sniper rifle inside

Tertiary/Special: Dragon Disabling Cannon: A large cannon longer than the Guardian is tall that is in the shape of a dragon's head with the long barrel being its open mouth surrounding the actual barrel of the cannon itself. The dragon's head is colored black with red eyes that glow brighter as the cannon charges before firing an EMP blast

Guardian description:
Max height: 20 feet tall
Color(s): Grey and golden brown.
Design: The Guardian unit is modeled after a kitsunemimi. The head is golden brown with blue tinted eyes. The top part of the chest where the cockpit sits is golden brown with a red orb in the center(It is merely for decoration, it doesn't do anything at all) and the neck is gray while the lower part of the chest is also gray. The Guardian-unit has square shaped pauldrons that jut out over the shoulders and are made to blend with the top half of the chest. On the left shoulder is in big white letters G-80. The upper arms are gray while the forearms and hands are golden brown. The waist is covered with triangular plate drapes covering the front and the hips. The thighs of the Guardian are gray and the lower legs have no feet but are color golden brown and function as built-in jet thrusters
Movement features: The Guardian has an added on jetpack like device to propel the unit forward through space and four golden brown rocket thrusters designed in the shape of kitsune tails. The tails sit in a peacock-like resting position and rotate into the cardinal directions to further boost forward movment speed as well as turning speed.
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