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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:56 pm

Let's talk about a story I can put my trap Fierce in.
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Re: I need a story

Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:00 pm

Trap Fierce Protagonist or Antagonist?
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:01 pm

Protagonist.
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Re: I need a story

Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:03 pm

Well...here's a checklist:

Setting-
Genre-
Antagonist(s)-
Theme(fantasy, sci-fi, etc.)-
Title-

And we fulfill the last criteria by making up characters to use.


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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:03 pm

Ok. Neutral force in? Yes or no?
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:04 pm

OK then. Well setting's obviously gonna be on Lore, unless someone wants it on a different place altogether.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:05 pm

Well a new setting would be good.
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Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:06 pm

Stuff like Neutral force will be developed later.

I'd say Lore, unless we wanna make an original setting.

If it's Lore, theme's probably's fantasy and genre's obvious.

Oh, right, plot.

Well, under what circumstances will Fierce be a trap? Spell? Born that way/spin-off story?

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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:08 pm

Born that way I guess. Keep thinking of him coming upon a gang of thugs that wanna beat him up and then he tells them they're not worth his time and that he doesn't even have to try to take them down, so he draws a small sword and kills them all. I dunno.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:09 pm

That could work.
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:10 pm

That doesn't mean it has to be part of the story.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:13 pm

Maybe he could face off with a mortal enemy?
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Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:14 pm

It works for now.

If we do use the thugs, then the plot could carry on by having them part of a rather large mob, and their boss gets pissed.

This plot is always open to change, however. I'll throw my two cents in. I always go for relative large-scale, world-threatening stuff. A great cliche' imo.

Space-time becomes destabilized and rips in the Void happen. The tears also allow war-like species from other places to invade the planet. A psycho-symbiotic entity comes through the rift and takes control and uses the already dangerous armies to wreak more havoc than before.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:16 pm

damn you are good.
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:17 pm

OK then. If we go with the mob thing. The mob could probably be a hot bishounen or something. I just think guys like that would make awesome bosses. Mostly because Ciel's awesome too.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:19 pm

I wanted to add an evil twin.
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Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:19 pm

Yeah...that works. Great! No evil twins, too cliche

Well, guess I'll be using Makon for this one...

Plot- Protagonists vs Antagonistic mob
Setting-Lore
Theme-Fantasy

Now.....Title?
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:20 pm

That'll be a tricky one.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:22 pm

We got to use your cliche. Why not mine?
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:24 pm

What cliche'? It's only a cliche' among Americans, not anime. Only instance I've seen them use evil gangs was in GITS and the first few episdes of Hayate the combat butler.
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Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:25 pm

Well DM's is lame, frankly. And more used than mine. Plus my cliche is still being used in modern movies. And I wasn't talking about your idea Arcus.

Well....maybe make up a name for the organization and name it...

Trap Fierce Spin-Off: [name of organization]

To be practical, but not sensational.

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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:27 pm

Yeah now that I think about it. The evil twin thing is used far too much.
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Post by Arcus on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:27 pm

>.> But then we'd have to come up with a name for the organization.
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Post by Razorshell on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:29 pm

And calling it the Organization seems alittle weak.
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Post by Proxzki on Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:31 pm

-.-

Or we could call it something random like Applesauce.
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